Monday, November 16, 2009

1st attempt



Here is my first picture attempt at my them and some editing. Let me know what you think?




6 comments:

  1. Compositionally I think its great. I love how the lines on the floor all lead to the bathtub and the main subject. Same with the lines on the back wall. I dont know what the jagged lines on the back wall are, but its kinda interesting how they mimic the cord of the television. I think i would like it better without them though. I think the shampoo area is a little distracting from the rest because of the complimentary color scheme. Probably nitpicking, but I would like it if the white at the top right were gone. Overall I like it a lot.

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  2. I agree with Ryan. The shampoo bottles are a little distracting, possibly consider switching them out with something neutral.
    But I do love the scene and the lighting is very cool and gives the image a specific mood.

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  3. Thanks Ryan yeah those are cracks in the wall, but i took out the shampoo and i like it more so good idea haha. Yeah i have been trying to get that white sink out its very annoying.

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  4. Am i supposed to look at his photography or his installations?

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  5. I happen to like the shampoo where it is and as well the color of them but i could see where you guys are coming from and how it is distracting so maybe swop them out with something less colorful ?

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